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ScottN

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Gender: Male


Posted: Oct 4, 2020 - 8:13am

 oldviolin wrote:
All of those old men are just passing through
..
 
This could also become a short story or vignette—seriously.  Some of those lines seem like also good first lines of a paragraph. Have fun!
 
oldviolin

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Location: esse quam videri
Gender: Male


Posted: Oct 4, 2020 - 8:03am

All of those old men are just passing through

Like stick shifts, hubcaps  and service station bells;
Esso, Union '76, Pure...

I see them from a boy's keen-eyed viewpoint.

I study their look and speaking voice; worn out hands and worn in faces.

The junkyard visits with my Father where Greasy Gene stood larger than life, wearing Red Man stained bib overalls, one giant hand holding a wad of money and another taking money from younger guys like my Father; buying brake drums or sealed beams or thin strips of chromed moldings.

A T rex named Rex sitting silently, obediently and knowingly by his side.

"Don't ever call Mr. Cheek Greasy Gene to his face" my Father would say. "Why" I asked. "It's disrespectful', he replied. I puzzled.
"And don't mess with Rex".

When you're a little boy a magnificent German Shepherd taller than you is quite the heart locker. Maybe even if you're not a little boy. 

No shepherd like a good. shepherd...

I'm there now, on the way home, clunking along in my Father's 1948 Dodge pickup.
Flat head. Wooden bed.

The feel of that bench seat, 
The smells and the sounds...

My Father double-clutching and grind-shifting gears.

"Why", I ask. "What would happen if you didn't shift gears"?

"Then your engine would blow up" he replied, "and you won't be able to get anywhere."

My Pop had his way to express 
things. They passed along with him. Right through me...
oldviolin

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Location: esse quam videri
Gender: Male


Posted: Sep 18, 2020 - 11:05am

If the earth were flat
like a giant cookie crumbling
all falling into space like sugary asteroids tumbling

Someone would be there to stand it on edge and call it pie, the baker fumbling
to keep stuffing all four and twenty black boids nigh...

But I say there's no need to fear!
Close your bloodshot eyes and heave your cosmic spear
and let it orbit like there's no sphere so dear...

wow. I'm proud of just how bad that really is lol
oldviolin

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Location: esse quam videri
Gender: Male


Posted: Aug 21, 2020 - 2:37pm



 Ohmsen wrote:


 oldviolin wrote:
In all the selves
and all the dreams
In all the lightning moments
The reaching upward
falling out
A latent shard there foments 

The hollow plow the fallow how
the greenless barren furrow
a dread forked maze
with empty gaze
The fragrant earthen burrow

Along a linen line the mists
and in the glaring sun amidst
the listing vessels burning gift
a swollen stinking sinking rift
Sew seed where the sounds are kissed...

 

I'd do that in a major scale, though, not minor!



(If you like to talk about it, feel free to PM me.)
 

I'll have to edit for clarity lol.
I think I hear the bass line...
oldviolin

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Gender: Male


Posted: Aug 20, 2020 - 1:21pm

In all the selves
and all the dreams
In all the lightning moments
The reaching upward
falling out
A latent shard there foments 

The hollow plow the fallow how
the greenless barren furrow
a dread forked maze
with empty gaze
The fragrant earthen burrow

Along a linen line the mists
and in the glaring sun amidst
the listing vessels burning gift
a swollen stinking sinking rift
Sew seed where the sounds are kissed...

sirdroseph

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Location: Not here, I tell you wat
Gender: Male


Posted: Jul 11, 2020 - 4:46am

 whatshisname wrote:
Come sit down beside me
I said to myself,
And altho it didn't make sense,
I held my own hand
As a small sign of trust
And together I sat on the fence
                                                  Michael Leunig  ,The Cartoonist and Poet
 
Love this one.{#Clap}
whatshisname

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Location: West OZ
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Posted: Jul 11, 2020 - 4:07am

Come sit down beside me
I said to myself,
And altho it didn't make sense,
I held my own hand
As a small sign of trust
And together I sat on the fence
                                                  Michael Leunig  ,The Cartoonist and Poet
oldviolin

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Gender: Male


Posted: Jul 8, 2020 - 6:41pm

she brings the light
while I squander and grope
for time
to repair

Then to a fixed point on a chart
somewhere forgotten by the world
we love over grief and blend salt with water; in a way-
eternal...
oldviolin

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Gender: Male


Posted: Jul 8, 2019 - 7:20pm

window

she was a visage of timeless treasure
a soft, stained glass window
cultured, gothic.   metaphoric

she was a beautiful paneled door
an ornate bell with manual opera
sweetly, singing crafted her passage

a jewel toned tincture she was
a drape of ruby and amber and golden light
a home near the very point of view

she was a dream, a mother
crystal blue cornea, precious sight
from babe to bond not undwelt
oldviolin

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Location: esse quam videri
Gender: Male


Posted: May 2, 2019 - 6:15am

 Antigone wrote:


 oldviolin wrote:
In pain, there is poetry
in parallels and paradigms it's there
in cubes and quantums it projects like a throne
and with a groan, beckoning-
'to sit and sift your kingdom come'
in the will and one in not undone
to satisfy color and tone and crumbling spire
only to build it higher
a poem of fire
razed in darkness
risen in light...
 

Lovely.

 
Why thank you. I guess its part of something much larger
but I was in a moment after that Longfellow poem in the other thread.
{#Good-vibes}
Antigone

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Gender: Female


Posted: May 1, 2019 - 11:50am



 oldviolin wrote:
In pain, there is poetry
in parallels and paradigms it's there
in cubes and quantums it projects like a throne
and with a groan, beckoning-
'to sit and sift your kingdom come'
in the will and one in not undone
to satisfy color and tone and crumbling spire
only to build it higher
a poem of fire
razed in darkness
risen in light...
 

Lovely.
oldviolin

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Location: esse quam videri
Gender: Male


Posted: May 1, 2019 - 7:52am

In pain, there is poetry
in parallels and paradigms it's there
in cubes and quantums it projects like a throne
and with a groan, beckoning-
'to sit and sift your kingdom come'
in the will and one in not undone
to satisfy color and tone and crumbling spire
only to build it higher
a poem of fire
razed in darkness
risen in light...
SeriousLee

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Location: Dans l'milieu d'deux milles livres


Posted: Dec 28, 2018 - 11:57am

An eye for a tooth
A lie for a truth
You keep on living
In the Superman booth
Banging your head
Against the wall
Until all enemies
Crumble and fall
Only to rise again 
The very next day
No matter how loud
You scream and pray
With both knees bended
On the cold hard floor
Knocking and knocking
On the opened door
oldviolin

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Location: esse quam videri
Gender: Male


Posted: Dec 22, 2018 - 11:25pm

Flint rocks
Transdermal motorway
light guides
dove
oldviolin

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Gender: Male


Posted: Oct 31, 2018 - 12:07pm

Not a solemn note was there
as we closed our lessons
Bleak through the pitch, and incredibly high
a noted satisfaction with mystery
Earning yearning learning burning
blairing
uncaring for
listless silence like drool on a school desk
Proclivities

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Posted: Oct 24, 2018 - 11:53am


oldviolin

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Gender: Male


Posted: May 29, 2018 - 3:55pm

 helenofjoy wrote:

This does not qualify as Bad Poetry. {#Stupid}

 
I was looking for a ' Not That Bad Poetry' thread but I was afraid if I posted it there too it would be redundant again...{#Shifty}

{#Good-vibes} or something
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Gender: Female


Posted: May 29, 2018 - 6:17am

 oldviolin wrote:
Calloused faith encumbered
His magic gone awry
He dreamed his cycles numbered
And mansions in the sky
But for all the weathered clamor
And withered weary prose
He wore a lightening stammer
And thunder with a rose
Then waves arise and buoys stirred
Enigmatic in the dark
The depths and breadths immeasured
The torrent winds embarked
Abreast to constellations cure
With sextant heart aligned
The land afar the water pure
The times of time relined
Then rendered all asunder
Magma, mist and man
The finished feral plunder fill
The breach to understand

 
This does not qualify as Bad Poetry. {#Stupid}
oldviolin

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Gender: Male


Posted: May 25, 2018 - 12:13pm

Calloused faith encumbered
His magic gone awry
He dreamed his cycles numbered
And mansions in the sky
But for all the weathered clamor
And withered weary prose
He wore a lightening stammer
And thunder with a rose
Then waves arise and buoys stirred
Enigmatic in the dark
The depths and breadths immeasured
The torrent winds embarked
Abreast to constellations cure
With sextant heart aligned
The land afar the water pure
The times of time relined
Then rendered all asunder
Magma, mist and man
The finished feral plunder fill
The breach to understand


oldviolin

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Gender: Male


Posted: May 21, 2018 - 8:46am

 ScottFromWyoming wrote:


 
Be bestest I always say...
plus purple sock
Don't call me rover
Send FiFi right over
My moth's bleeding, Bert!
Peas out
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